My first try ..

Hiii, my name's Taylor. This is my first critique; don't hurt me. Cx
So this was your first try ? That's amazing ! There aren't any flaws as I can see, either. If you're going to continue working on drawing [ you have beautiful photography as well ] , here's one thing you should know - if you're going more towards realism here, you should soften the angles in the face. i.e., the shapes in the nose and upper lip and bridge of the nose could be less noticeable [ as they are in real life. ]
That's all I have to say. Great work, I really love it.♥